what do you think of my story?
it is about two teens a boy and girl who get accepted to a new under water submarine school. they and many others are the first to get to do somthing like this. as they are desending a pipe that had been porrly put together bareaks and water pours in. the two teens who dislike each very much end up in one out of two of the safty rooms that had been made just for this type of thing. they were briefed before on things like this and nknew how to put the scuba equiptment on. they must make th echoice of dying with thier friends or saving themselfs. they end up saving themselfs. they end up washed away onto a long forgotten island. they then must struggle with the vast amount of emtions for thier losses and eachother. just a little bit of waht i’m thinkiing . let me know what you think.
also names for the book and sub are great. thanks.
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SUB:STANCE Mixed by Scuba (OSTGUTCD11) part3
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